Tuesday, September 30, 2008

forgive me father for i have sinned
i don't know where i'm standing
i don't know where i've been

today resembles yesterday
tomorrow has no inviting space
the color of Saturday
the mutation of leathered lace

it forges an unsigned check
kisses a rosy cheek
bundles in sticks and twigs
the loudest voice i seek

forgive me father for i have loved
unwarranted and necessary
in the round so little and
yet so many

dirty by the hands that cannot touch
accepted by a two-tone rainbow
taken to heaven
and dropped to the earth once again

cleansed from the root of the tree
i renamed each leaf
i chewed the bark
smiled with dirt between my teeth
but never spat it out.

2 comments:

Ink-Stained Wretch said...

"smiled with dirt between my teeth
but never spat it out"


Strong and striking imagery... hope to hear you read at the Soulon again soon.

Nance Broderzen said...

Yes, the imagery is wonderful...and I really like the little touches of rhyme scheme amid mostly non-rhyming stanzas:)